1 They hail me as one living, --Those who walk and see him as they are
But don't they know
That I have died of late years, --- Died emotionally
Untombed although? ---- Not in a tomb, like a zombie
2 I am but a shape that stands here,
A pulseless mould, -A mold wiithout a pulse
A pale past picture, screening -- outdated 'picture' Just playing over and over
Ashes gone cold. --Ashes are a product of fire and they lose all their color and warmth when the fire goes out.
3 Not at a minute's warning,
Not in a loud hour, - The statement above plus this one means that his 'passing' was not all at once or in a special way
For me ceased Time's enchantments -- The excitement of life has stopped.
In hall and bower. -- House words. He was an architect and loved it.
4 There was no tragic transit, - i.e smoke and lights or anyone making a big deal.
No catch of breath, -as in he hasn't died yet
When silent seasons inched me - Overwhelmed slowly by misery
On to this death .... -This death, implying a different kind
4 — A Troubadour-youth I rambled - Young poet with not a whole lot to say
With Life for lyre, - who took life as music=positive
The beats of being raging -the natural rhythm of life
In me like fire. - he was passionate about life/being
5 But when I practised eyeing -potentially acquiring
The goal of men, -other, common jobs
It iced me, and I perished
A little then. -his first little brush with death
6 When passed my friend, my kinsfolk,
Through the Last Door, -Door to the beyond, death
And left me standing bleakly, -alone
I died yet more; -chipping away
7 And when my Love's heart kindled
In hate of me, -This statement and the one above express that his love has passion to spite him rather than love him
Wherefore I knew not, died I -unbeknownst to him
One more degree.
8 And if when I died fully -Like he's not even present, he lost all sense of feeling
I cannot say, - not sure
And changed into the corpse-thing -when the full transformation took place
I am to-day, -he is aware of his position but with no desire to live otherwise
9 Yet is it that, though whiling -waiting through
The time somehow
In walking, talking, smiling, -he's a fake pseudo-person acting like a person but with ashes for insides
I live not now. -he lives but he is not living
This poem by Thomas Hardy is called Dead Man Walking. It expresses the viewpoint that Hardy, through the tolls of life is now just a walking corpse. In stanzas 1,2 he explains how he sees himself and feels, telling the reader that he feels like a '...pulseless mold..' (2) and that he has' ...died of late years...' (1) therefore giving us the first question: What does he mean dead? Closely following that query is Why?
Stanzas 3,4 both explain how there was no ceremony or anything special as he slowly eked toward the zombie that he is. That 'There was no tragic transit...' (4) and it certainly did not happen all at once but '...silent seasons inched [him]...' towards his current position when the poem was written. Our first question was answered in the first four stanzas when he tells us that when he says dead he means emotionally, that his '...ashes [have] gone cold...' and that there was 'No catch of breath...' implying he hasn't caught his last breath thus saying he is still alive. Duh. the next 3 stanzas answer our question why.
Why is he like a dead man walking? At first he explains what he was like before the events that stole his life away occurred.
'— A Troubadour-youth I rambled
With Life for lyre,
The beats of being raging
In me like fire.'
A troubadour is a lyric poet or minstrel of sort that tells stories using whimsy and charm. Hardy compares himself to such in this transitional passage. He parallels himself to a troubadour-youth because he feels his poetry created when he was young was far too whimsical, with not a whole lot to say. He was passionate about life, with 'The beats of being raging..In [him] like fire.'
and he didn't take life seriously enough, making it equal with music or, synonymously, positivity.
This changed when he started getting the dark poison that life often brings. He takes questions his own career, (5) loses his love to hate, (7) family and friends pass on and leave him alone,(6) all these things combined with the unfairness of it all drives Hardy into a slow overwhelming misery that makes him the corpse he expresses in A Dead Man Walking.
This poem doesn't have much variety when it comes to literary devices. But the three it does have (Alliteration/Diction, Simile, Metaphor) are utilized precisely. A few examples literary devices in Dead Man Walking are:
'They hail me as one living' -comparing himself to the living (S)
' I am but a shape that stands here, a pulseless mold.' -no pulse, no blood, no warmth, a body without a soul (M)
' The beats of being raging in me like fire' -Describing how his passion for life burned (S)
'..Silent seasons..' -Silent seasons creates the most pleasing sounds. Sounds on the tongue like the actual slow passing of time. (A/D)
'And changed me into this corpse-thing I am to-day.' -Not even like a corpse, he is a corpse!
The theme of this poem is the outcome of sorrow. Through the tribulations that Hardy experienced, the only light at the end of the tunnel was the train. There was no grand triumph, his encounters with trials left him feeling like ashes gone cold, like a dead man with a smile every now and again. Life sucked the life from him.
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